At Uni, all students have sports
units in PE throughout the school year up until they become juniors. Every year
we go through the same cycle of sports units which include frisbee, floor
hockey, badminton, pickleball (?), and kickball. This has become normal and
accepted at Uni after years and years of doing the same thing. However, I
believe that we should reconsider whether these sports units are truly the most
useful and educational for students.
PE stands
for physical education, and just as the PE teachers always tell us, PE is a
class just like any other class we take at Uni. This means that we should do
our best in PE just like we give our best in other classes, but it also means
that we should expect to learn useful things just like we expect from other
classes. I believe that PE sports classes should educate students on sports
that will actually be relevant later on in life. PE should prepare students so
that they are able to engage in the culture of sports by themselves even after
high school. With the current curriculum, I believe that Uni students are not
getting the proper education or exposure to sports that are a huge part of
culture in America and even around the world. Some of these sports that Uni
students are missing out on include baseball, football, basketball, and soccer.
These four sports are the four most popular sports in the US, and yet we are
not being taught about any of these sports in PE. Instead, we are learning
about and participating in sports such as badminton, frisbee, and pickleball.
Although
badminton and frisbee are well known and fairly popular, there is no way that
these sports should take priority over the other four major sports that I
listed above. No one can argue against the fact that baseball, football,
basketball, and soccer are all a much bigger part of American sports culture
than badminton or frisbee. If this is true, and if it also true that the point
of PE is to teach students about relevant sports, then why is it that most of
our curriculum involves sports that we most likely won’t get involved in again instead
of ones that will actually stick with us for the rest of our lives through
culture? The worst part is that badminton and frisbee are some of the more
relevant sports that we have. Pickleball is a sport that I and many others
never knew even existed, and I can almost guarantee that I will never encounter
this sport again after I leave Uni.
Teaching
baseball, football, basketball, and soccer is an ideal PE curriculum, but the
truth is that having this type of curriculum is impossible at a school like
Uni. The main problem is that we do not have enough money to buy all the gear,
equipment, and fields. However, I do believe that we can still make a much
better curriculum using what we have. We can definitely have a basketball unit,
since we have all the equipment we would need. We have a large gym with 8
basketball hoops, and we have numerous basketballs that are unfortunately only
used by the basketball teams. We can also definitely have a soccer unit, as we
have soccer balls and would just need to set up goals within the gym to play. Floor
hockey is a sport that is definitely much more relevant in society than the
other sports, so I think that we should keep this unit. Since we don’t have the
money or land to have a baseball unit, I believe that we should keep kickball
as a replacement for baseball since both sports have many similar rules and
concepts. Pickleball should be removed from the curriculum completely because
most people don’t even know this kind of sports exists, it teaches students
nothing significant or relevant, and on top of all of that the sport itself is
not enjoyable for most students. Football shouldn’t be hard in terms of cost,
but it is a sport that I cannot see the majority of Uni students participating
in. I would be willing to compromise football for frisbee since we can’t have
all of the most ideal sports units. Badminton could either be kept or removed,
depending on what students would want. Overall, I think that a PE curriculum
with sports units frisbee, basketball, kickball, soccer, floor hockey, and
perhaps badminton would be a much more ideal and educational curriculum.
I really Like this editorial as it clearly defines exactly what your thoughts and ideas are. It also discusses the opposition and their ideologies, which i think gives your editorial a well rounded feel. I would however, add more detail to your argument maybe possibly add more numbers. For instance you can say that baseball is more popular than pickleball but unless you do the research I cant just trust your word.
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