“Providing
a Better Environment for Health and Physical Education for University
Laboratory High School Students through the Construction of a Gymnasium”
Executive Summary
University Laboratory High
School is a selective admission, public, laboratory school that is located in
and closely associated with the University of Illinois in Urbana-Champaign. Uni
(short for University Laboratory High School) was established in 1921 and since
then has been serving academically talented students in the state of Illinois. Uni’s
mission is “to spark the creative fervor and high aspirations of talented young
people; to ignite their intellectual growth; to develop their critical thinking
skills; to challenge them through traditional and experimental strategies; to
instill in them a sense of citizenship; and to positively influence the larger
educational community.”
Uni, despite its yearly enrollment
of 300 students, has many accomplished and successful alumni, including three
Nobel laureates and a Pulitzer Prize Winner. Uni continues to nurture students
to their full potential and provides an environment where students can grow and
succeed, as evidenced by the consistent success in various math and science
competitions as well as standardized tests. Uni has also been recognized several
times as a “public elite” school by Newsweek. Along with its talented students,
Uni has excellent faculty and staff. All of Uni’s teachers are very experienced
and well qualified in their respective fields. Uni teachers are very dedicated
to Uni, with most serving at the school for numerous years and some even
serving for decades.
Uni is a publicly funded school,
and although it receives support from general state aid, it does not receive
support from local property taxes. Uni was originally funded by the University
of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign’s College of Education, but the College of
Education stopped financially supporting Uni in the 1980s. Today, Uni is funded
mostly by the Illinois State Board of Education, and additional funding comes
from the University of Illinois and other private donations.
Problem Statement
This proposal has been written
as a request for funding to build a new gymnasium for University Laboratory
High School. University Laboratory High School has noticed several factors that
point to the need for the construction of a new gymnasium:
1. 1. Uni
students currently share the University’s old men’s gymnasium with gymnasts,
which often leads to various distractions, hindrances, and inconveniences for
students during their PE class.
2. 2. Kenney
Gym (the gym currently being used by Uni students) is a block away from Uni,
which 1) makes it inconvenient for the PE staff to commute back and forth to
run errands and perform their jobs efficiently and 2) causes students to lose
PE class time due to allotted time given to arrive at the gym.
3. 3. Many of
the locker rooms in Kenney Gym that Uni students use are extremely unsanitary
and harmful to health, evidenced by regular sightings of cockroaches and the
lack of janitors to clean and fix necessities.
Currently, nothing is being done
about the problems listed above. Students have learned to adapt to the
inconvenient circumstances in the past, but as the gym ages, these problems are
worsening to the point that they cannot be ignored. Uni has been unable to
build a new gym because we do not have sufficient funding for such a huge
project. This is why we are requesting a total of 1.2 million dollars of
funding for this project. This money will be used to demolish the old gym
located next to Uni and to build a new gym on that land. A new gym would solve
all of the problems listed above as well as provide a healthy learning
environment for Uni students that will help to continue Uni’s tradition of
excellence. A new gym would be of great help to students who are being nurtured
into adults who can positively influence the larger educational community.
I really like the tone you had for this grant proposal. It was formal but still read easily, and you made a good case for getting a new Uni gymnasium. It would be nice to have some more quantitative data for the project though. In particular, I'd like to see a time-frame for the project. Other than that, I really like it!
ReplyDeleteI thought this was really good - formal but not annoying to read. It's also good that you gave a specific amound of money that you need. Something you may want to talk about is what this gym will include maybe. I mean we have the 70's weights but would we also get a track and other stuff that we use now?
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ReplyDeleteSolid work, Minwoo. In addition to the comments above, I think details pertaining to the location of this new gymnasium would be beneficial to the overall grant as well. Since one of the primary issues is proximity and commute, a grant reviewer would likely be interested to see how you were improving things in this regard. Aside from that detail, things look good.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way you described Uni. You made it sound quite prestigious and successful in its endeavors! I also think that you do an excellent job of stating the problems very specifically. Make sure to provide an exact sum of money that you want in the executive summary! Additionally, I think that it's actually quite humorous to read this as a Uni student. Your descriptions are spot on. I would personally really like to see this grant come to life.
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